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Titles That Might Have Been (And In Some Cases Couldn’t Possibly Be)…

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Still working on Fatal Invasion. It’s amazing looking back at how long I have lived with this story. No Escape, the short story that started the series, was published in 2017. Work on Fatal Shadow started later that year, so I have been working on the series for eight years. Back then, it was called The Knotted Man. Glad I changed it. Often my first draft titles change. The first draft of the Golden Rule Duology (A Bright Power Rising/The Unconquered Sun) was rather apt but very cumbersome The Two-Thumbed HandFatal Shadow‘s sequel changed from Lesser Evil to Greater Evil, because I came to realise the latter had much better. Gilded Treason was Gilded Cage for a long time, but the original title, I felt at least, was a little too generic. It almost became Gilded Snare at one point. I try to pick titles that don’t bring up too many books by the same name. Obviously, if Stephen King or Brandon Sanderson picks one of my titles for their work, there’s nothing I do except chalk it up to bad luck.

Name changes can also happen to short stories. No Escape was originally called PreyHoard was called The Hoarder, but I changed it to move the focus on the main character rather than the villain. One Moonlit Night was called How to save the Earth? for a long time which was not really what the story is about. On the flip side, many of the other short stories had their names fixed from the first draft: The Fate HealerMurder Seat, the Alienity stories and so on. I suppose it’s just easier to get to the heart of what a short story is about.

Blood Sacrifice

(Warning: This a horror story.)

She slew all three before he woke.

Still clutching the wet knife, she stood at the passage tomb’s silent heart, barely able to breathe in expectation of his waking as the grave’s own dead-cold breath sank through bloodstained clothes into her shivering flesh.

She yelped and almost dropped the knife as he threw off the stone slab before her like a blanket and inhaled the air still moist with staling blood. He rose, a man as tall and straight as the spear he carried, a mighty giant from a dim, misremembered past. The monks’ scribblings had not prepared her for the Formorian. His kind were the first inhabitants of this land, or rather the first to survive, almost gods who long ago returned to the sea and earth that birthed them. The scribes had written of them as either beautiful or monstrously ugly, but in truth, the one-eyed man perfectly embodied both states at once.

He spoke to her in a language she didn’t recognize. On and on, he intoned, a torrent of words she couldn’t comprehend that flooded the chamber with their mocking echoes.

Silence fell. Her lips trembled with the urge to speak, but wonder and awe had robbed her voice.

His hand reached so gracefully toward her the first she knew of it was its touch as soft as a dying breath against her lips. She flinched from it, but he had already drawn something out of her, a thread of her soul, perhaps.

“Why have you have woken me before the Winter has passed?” he asked in the language she spoke, her language.

“But it is mid-summer,” she said, pointing to the bright mouth of the shaft behind her. A shroud of gore covered the little bodies on the floor. Bloodstains on the spiral-covered walls mapped out the death-throes carved by her knife. She was so drenched in blood she might have been one of them herself. She had carried out the rite exactly as proscribed, to the last pitiless detail.

“Winter isn’t a time of year,” he said with the patience of someone explaining to an infant. “It isn’t the cold. It’s death, and death is due to stalk this land for many more centuries.”

“But we need you now!” she pleaded, suddenly aware she was alone with him in the chamber. Nobody else had dared to do what had to be done. “Invaders have come and bring our doom.” It was some of their fruit who lay dead and broken on the floor.

With a weary sigh, the giant drove his spear through her chest. He struck with such force and delicacy she didn’t feel her skewering, even as her lifeblood gushed from the wound.

“To me, you’re all invaders,” he said.

It was only then that she screamed, the passage’s echo taking up her last cry so that she screamed threefold.

© Noel Coughlan

Gilded Treason is Officially Released!

Thanks to everyone who supported the preorder! It was great to see that so many readers are excited as me to continue the adventure.

Just a quick note that Tuesday 8th October is the last day to buy the ebooks of Greater Evil and Gilded Treason at 99c for now.

Gilded Treason is Officially Released on 6th October!

The third book of Champions of Fate is almost here! The book will be offically released on 6th October. In the meantime, you can preorder it HERE.

The city state of Gyre once lauded Drinith as a hero. Now, she has become its most notorious fugitive.

Two of Gyre’s most powerful oligarchs are murdered the same night, plunging the city into turmoil. Suspicion falls on Drinith. Her home is raided, her friends are arrested, and former allies turn against her.

Betrayal haunts her every step through unforgiving streets and alleyways. Everyone from the most chivalrous courtesar to the lowest hired sword hunts her. Can she keep ahead of them until she unravels the city’s darkest secret and reveals the identity of the killer?

Ten Years of Self-publishing.

Ten years ago, on the 6th April 2014, I first hit the publish button. for the first time. I had poured my soul into A Bright Power Rising I was about to publish for the guts of twenty years before that. Every step in the publishing process had been painful, delayed and victim to error. Already I had discovered that the original cover that had a glaring typo everyone had missed and had it amended. I always envy those new authors who unbox their first copies of their first book in floods of tears. I didn’t cry, but if I had, it wouldn’t have been from joy. In truth, I was anxious.

I am now on the cusp of publishing my fifth novel and that worry is now in the past. Here are ten lessons I learned from ten years of self-publishing.

(1) Fear is your greatest enemy, but sometimes that nagging doubt in the back of your head is your best friend.

(2) Learn from your mistakes so you can leave space for new ones to keep things interesting.

(3) Be grateful to those readers who love your work. Not everyone will like it and that is absolutely fine and normal. 

(4) Don’t comment on reviews. That has always been my policy from day one and I have seen nothing in ten years that has made me change my opinion.

(5) The demon of typos, Titivilus, always wins in the end, but do your best to conceal his victory. The industry standard is one error per page. Aim at zero errors but don’t expect to achieve it.

(6) Even things that can’t go wrong occasionally will, but sometimes good things just arrive out of the blue with little or no effort on your part. In short, luck plays a massive part. All you can do is to maximise the possibility of it finding you.

(7) It is important to be patient but don’t confuse patience with passivity. Keep moving.

(8) Every book and story poses its own particular challenges. Overcoming these obstacles is just a natural part of the writing process.

(9) Equally, sometimes it is better to recognise a story doesn’t work and walk away. The central concept may be flawed or you don’t emotionally connect with the story. Again, this is a natural part of the writing process. 

(10) Don’t forget to enjoy writing and publishing. Celebrate the successes.

2021 In Review

It’s time for a look back over the progress last year.

(1) I published Fatal Shadow on Amazon, the first book in the Champions of Fate Epic Fantasy series. Despite a less than successful launch, it has come good. Reviews/ratings are trickling in and most people seemed to have enjoyed it.

(2) I published Hoard, a horror short story on Amazon. This was originally written for the newsletter at Halloween and given away free to its subscribers before its official release.

(3) Through Ingram Spark, I expanded the availability of the paperbacks of The Golden Rule series (A Bright Power Rising/The Unconquered Sun/The Parting Gift) and also No Escape. This was largely because the titles were appearing on many on-line retailers but weren’t available. I also sorted out related issues on these sites where the book covers were missing or showed old covers.

(5) I published a background/history of The Golden Rule series in the newsletter and my website.

(6) Fatal Shadow’s sequel, Greater Evil, is finished except for a final proofread. I plan to publish it in February.

New Release: Hoard

Laura is Ger’s last hope.  His hoarding has ruined the lives of his neighbors and now threatens his own. As Laura and her team prepare to clean out his property under the glare of cameras, she is unaware that a sinister secret lies buried beneath the morass of junk, a dark truth waiting to kill her.

A six-thousand-word horror short story available from Amazon.

Cover Reveal – A Bright Power Rising & The Unconquered Sun

I feel like a pirate lowering my flag of convenience and hoisting the Jolly Roger! Below are the two new covers for A Bright Power Rising and The Unconquered Sun. They have a much more epic fantasy feel!

The ebooks are already available on Amazon and Kobo with the new versions appearing on the other stores in a couple of days. The paperbacks are to follow soon.

Fatal Shadow, Book 1 in the Champions of Fate Epic Fantasy Series

It is three years and seven months since I began work on this series. For all those years, on the rare occasions I posted about this series, I’ve spoken about it in code, not even referring to the books by name. (To be fair, many of those names changed multiple times.) There’s a long road ahead for me, mountains of story to climb. But the first milestone in this journey is very close and I’m more excited by this book than anything I’ve written in the past.

Finally, I’m in a postion to share with you some of the details. This book follows on almost nineteen years after the events of the short story No Escape. If you haven’t read it, I strongly suggest you do. You can download it for free at the moment.

Long ago, magic cracked apart the world and suspended great continents between two suns. But the ebb and flow of human history continues. Trade and war cross the void on dragon wings. Great empires rise and topple

As the rightful heir to one such fallen state, Drinith has known only exile, dashed hope, and constant threat. She has so far eluded the murderous intentions of the tyrant Magian the Infinite thanks to the prophetic visions of the oracle, Quiescat, but his power is failing. All he can glimpse in the future now is his own death.

An assassin’s blade forces her into a desperate gamble. She takes her one final chance to secure the ally she so desperately needs. But at the end of her journey, she’ll find deceit, betrayal, and murder. And she’ll learn Magian isn’t the only threat to her people.

Fatal Shadow is the first of six books in the Champions of Fate epic fantasy series for those readers who enjoy fast-paced action, intriguing characters, and imaginative world-building.

The ebook is available on Amazon for preorder HERE. It will be published on 22nd February 2021.

September Update: So Close

Last week a lot later than I had intended, I finally sent Book 1 to my editors. I had planned to send it just before my holidays in august but some valuable comments arrived just too late for me to process properly and I decided to finalise the fifth draft after I came back. I hate delays. It makes me feel like I’m swimming in molasses. However, there was no point rushing these things and making snap decisions I’d regret later. After this last draft, I’m satisfied that it’s ready to go. I found myself quibbling over smaller and smaller details.

All in all, it’s about six months since I started the 2nd draft. Hopefully, Book 2 will go faster. Things with respect to Covid restrictions have eased here somewhat. My daughter has gone back to school which pretty much gives me the mornings to work. My office moved upstairs out of the kitchen just in time for our puppy to figure out how to get on the kitchen table if the chairs are left a little out from it. She’s a good dog but she would have seen my computer set up as an exciting range of chew toys.

I had already gone about halfway through the 2nd draft of Book 2 in between revisions of Book 1. However, I need to refamiliarise myself with what I’ve done. Plus, I may have a surprise traitor on my hands from Book 1 (It was certainly a surprise when I thought of it) so I need to work that into the story.