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Titles That Might Have Been (And In Some Cases Couldn’t Possibly Be)…

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Still working on Fatal Invasion. It’s amazing looking back at how long I have lived with this story. No Escape, the short story that started the series, was published in 2017. Work on Fatal Shadow started later that year, so I have been working on the series for eight years. Back then, it was called The Knotted Man. Glad I changed it. Often my first draft titles change. The first draft of the Golden Rule Duology (A Bright Power Rising/The Unconquered Sun) was rather apt but very cumbersome The Two-Thumbed HandFatal Shadow‘s sequel changed from Lesser Evil to Greater Evil, because I came to realise the latter had much better. Gilded Treason was Gilded Cage for a long time, but the original title, I felt at least, was a little too generic. It almost became Gilded Snare at one point. I try to pick titles that don’t bring up too many books by the same name. Obviously, if Stephen King or Brandon Sanderson picks one of my titles for their work, there’s nothing I do except chalk it up to bad luck.

Name changes can also happen to short stories. No Escape was originally called PreyHoard was called The Hoarder, but I changed it to move the focus on the main character rather than the villain. One Moonlit Night was called How to save the Earth? for a long time which was not really what the story is about. On the flip side, many of the other short stories had their names fixed from the first draft: The Fate HealerMurder Seat, the Alienity stories and so on. I suppose it’s just easier to get to the heart of what a short story is about.

Blood Sacrifice

(Warning: This a horror story.)

She slew all three before he woke.

Still clutching the wet knife, she stood at the passage tomb’s silent heart, barely able to breathe in expectation of his waking as the grave’s own dead-cold breath sank through bloodstained clothes into her shivering flesh.

She yelped and almost dropped the knife as he threw off the stone slab before her like a blanket and inhaled the air still moist with staling blood. He rose, a man as tall and straight as the spear he carried, a mighty giant from a dim, misremembered past. The monks’ scribblings had not prepared her for the Formorian. His kind were the first inhabitants of this land, or rather the first to survive, almost gods who long ago returned to the sea and earth that birthed them. The scribes had written of them as either beautiful or monstrously ugly, but in truth, the one-eyed man perfectly embodied both states at once.

He spoke to her in a language she didn’t recognize. On and on, he intoned, a torrent of words she couldn’t comprehend that flooded the chamber with their mocking echoes.

Silence fell. Her lips trembled with the urge to speak, but wonder and awe had robbed her voice.

His hand reached so gracefully toward her the first she knew of it was its touch as soft as a dying breath against her lips. She flinched from it, but he had already drawn something out of her, a thread of her soul, perhaps.

“Why have you have woken me before the Winter has passed?” he asked in the language she spoke, her language.

“But it is mid-summer,” she said, pointing to the bright mouth of the shaft behind her. A shroud of gore covered the little bodies on the floor. Bloodstains on the spiral-covered walls mapped out the death-throes carved by her knife. She was so drenched in blood she might have been one of them herself. She had carried out the rite exactly as proscribed, to the last pitiless detail.

“Winter isn’t a time of year,” he said with the patience of someone explaining to an infant. “It isn’t the cold. It’s death, and death is due to stalk this land for many more centuries.”

“But we need you now!” she pleaded, suddenly aware she was alone with him in the chamber. Nobody else had dared to do what had to be done. “Invaders have come and bring our doom.” It was some of their fruit who lay dead and broken on the floor.

With a weary sigh, the giant drove his spear through her chest. He struck with such force and delicacy she didn’t feel her skewering, even as her lifeblood gushed from the wound.

“To me, you’re all invaders,” he said.

It was only then that she screamed, the passage’s echo taking up her last cry so that she screamed threefold.

© Noel Coughlan

A Friendly PSA to Kobo Buyers of My Books

Edit: This issue has since been resolved, thankfully.

Hi all. Just a quick warning that some of my books appear to be currently duplicated on the site. I priced them the same as all the other stores. Three of them are free (No Escape, The Fate Healer and The Parting Gift) while one of them (The Murder Seat) is at €0.99. The duplicates are at €5.33.

While I certainly think they might be worth that :), I have never charged that much for them. I’ve sent a query to Kobo about this and hopefully, this situation will be resolved soon. In the meantime, here are the correct links: